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Antarctica77 has locked down the series to the point you will have to buy CH 24. Share if you decide to buy. I chose not to buy based on the last two or three chapters where the focus shifted from Toby as the antagonist and detoured into Linda fucking everything with her dick (Not into futinari). Antarctica77 had set up a good foundation where both Amanda and Linda (as woman only) could have been engaged in the seduction of Josh and creating tension along with Toby trying to take all the women Josh has a relationship with. Really, he dumped the whole story line that he set up with Toby. No more compromising and fucking Luna. Betrayal, pregnancy, blackmail, all gone.
so i now understand what you were getting at. In the last three chapters the author threw the toby arc on the back burner switched gears and seems to be trying to set itself up for more chapters. the Linda sex was fine but it had already mostly been covered. i was looking for the reveal of the wife and how dark she has become but the author teased and then just kicked it down the road. Hes now introducing another new strong female character. and you know sometime during the political campaign the sisters video will be released. toby will be back for a bit but based on past experience Kim's betrayal wont come outkick that further down the road for more chapters.

The sad thing is that stories like this that are well written draw you in and you want to read to a conclusion, the reveal, the confrontation and the aftermath. The sex fades to the background ( u cant keep saying the character is feeling something they have never felt before , it gets old).

Linda cares for josh and wants to protect him, while kims desire is to see her husband humiliated and ruined. It was good when the author was presenting how each character sees the future unfolding. that all being dealt with would have been great. luna dealing with toby was good start that should have continued to completion. with a third story if he wanted to go there. oh well. i might come back after he written another ten chapters , maybe the story will have progressed by then.
 
so i now understand what you were getting at. In the last three chapters the author threw the toby arc on the back burner switched gears and seems to be trying to set itself up for more chapters. the Linda sex was fine but it had already mostly been covered. i was looking for the reveal of the wife and how dark she has become but the author teased and then just kicked it down the road. Hes now introducing another new strong female character. and you know sometime during the political campaign the sisters video will be released. toby will be back for a bit but based on past experience Kim's betrayal wont come outkick that further down the road for more chapters.

The sad thing is that stories like this that are well written draw you in and you want to read to a conclusion, the reveal, the confrontation and the aftermath. The sex fades to the background ( u cant keep saying the character is feeling something they have never felt before , it gets old).

Linda cares for josh and wants to protect him, while kims desire is to see her husband humiliated and ruined. It was good when the author was presenting how each character sees the future unfolding. that all being dealt with would have been great. luna dealing with toby was good start that should have continued to completion. with a third story if he wanted to go there. oh well. i might come back after he written another ten chapters , maybe the story will have progressed by then.
Now you know why I am not paying for CH 24. With his money problems, I do not know how productive Antarctica77 will be this year.
 
All of these long-forms kinda burned out on me at the same time. Almost like everyone's writing the same story with different character names. Still hoping to find 'Best of Friends' after chapter 40, though.
It's true. Almost everyone seems to be writing the same trope where MC gets more humiliated and FMC gets meaner and more cruel as the story progresses. However, 'Best of Friends' was different as Rachel still loved MC even after all the dalliances with Mike and Ethan. I am surprised that the series has suddenly disappeared from the radar.
 
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