Looking for Don Silver thread Toxic Attraction chapters

[Pete]

Hope I find Looking for don Silver thread TA chapters

 

[bluepixiegurl316]

Agree this thread is getting out of hand
Anyways here you

Word count.
Oliver Twist 161,712
Pride and Prejudice 124,713
Executive Privilege 193,662

It really amazes me how long all these stories are.

 

[Powerconti]

Hello guys,
Long time lurker here.
I created this account because of this opportunity to add feedback.
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In your statement, you have highlighted some interesting points and illustrated them with examples from other stories.
It is to be hoped that the author, ‘Sire Reichenbach’, will think about the most of these ideas.

It remains to be seen how this will develop in the coming chapters and which path she will take.
An analysis of the preceding chapters makes it clear that the plot could develop in two different directions.
On the one hand, there is the possibility that the development hinted at in the last two chapters will continue, resembling the story ‘TA’ mentioned earlier.
On the other hand, the plot could also take a new turn, in which the husband’s (James) presence comes to the fore and he resists the attempts at manipulation by the pair (Jenna and Ray). It is, in particular, the intention behind the plot that the pair are pursuing: to make him compliant and turn him into a weak, spineless supporting character.

At one point, he has reduced himself to a figure who can be described as undignified and dishonourable. This happened when he saved Jenna’s arse in front of her boss. In this scenario, he presented himself as the sole initiator and person responsible of Jenna's sexual encounter with Ray.
In doing so, he sacrificed himself for her and humiliated himself, all for her sake!
In the eighth chapter, the humiliation went even further: his (supposedly loving) wife treated him like a snail and ignored him as if he were a used handkerchief.

If Jenna (assuming that James reveals the reason why he led her into Ray’s company at the start) were to seek out Ray’s company with the intention of being close to him and were to go to him, James would have no choice but to separate from her.
It would be interesting to observe what efforts Jenna would make to win back her estranged husband.
This aspect could serve as a motivation for all the protagonists to find a solution to the new situation that has arisen.

-- PC

 

[polpolp]

Hello guys,
Long time lurker here.
I created this account because of this opportunity to add feedback.
I am serial buyer of hotwife erotica, always looking for the stories that match my taste, which has been dificult to satisfy.
I bought the 5 available volumes of the The Contact on Kobo after reading the "previews" here, so thanks for them.

sire_richenbach asked about the genres we like. My favourite BY FAR is the one on this quote: "Like is the premise that both the husband and wife do not want the wife to have sex with the other man, but some outside plot mechanic makes it so they have to? Then the husband saves her?". I think it's the one where the love of the couple is best preserved and the one that can be connected to real life. I don't know much stories on the genre. I rate Beat and the Beauties from kingbooruwa as a fine example https://www.literotica.com/series/se/410840. It was also the story that lead to me buy King B's - the author's Amazon name - entire book library, even if some of the others are more hardcore.

There's another one more recently, not on this site, from Stella Wynne on Amazon, called "The Kinky Housewife: Falling for the older neighbor" that's very hot and long, though it doesn't have the husband saving part. But it feels rather natural.
Another example more known here is Newlywed New Desires from Maddox Storrey, though the turnaround happens very late and it's point I am going to address on my review of The Contact a bit later down here.

I was at the end and remember yet another one: Alex Jamieson's "My Hotwife the Spy" two volume story series. Very good.

I too dispute this quote: "Or is everyone just happy with all the boundaries and theres no conflict at all? The wife wants both her husband and the other man, the other man likes the wife but respects the couples boundaries, the husband is happy with the situation and in control. Seems like this gets boring pretty quick?" but with a receipt sort to speak. The recent, on Amazon, "Our First Wife-Sharing Experience at a Naturist Campground" from Wild Camper Secrets has the wife becoming a size queen but the husband from the start wants a new woman and the wife agrees. It's a long story but single volume. I understand sire_richenbach's reluntanct to write stories like this as they are indeed hard to into monetizable serials - they work best as standalone books.

But everyone has their tastes. With stories like, what The Contact is turning to be and most of Peter G Johnson stories, I buy the volumes until the wife loses respect for the husband - because without respect, saying "i love you" are just words - and with Peter that's usually volume 1, which is a shame as he has the best premises in the business - IMHO.

Now The Contact, I should have dropped it when the wife disrespected the husband at volume 2-3 with the SA charge but moving on. I decided to keep playing the findom cuck for a while longer.
The story is a risky bet as there are volumes with little to no sex so the plot has to stand. I respect the sire_richenbach for going that route but be careful. There's a whole different between what the characters say and what they do.
Volume 7 ended somewhat promising but the premise of volume 8 was ominious, the content even worse. As it is, the decision to buy volume 8 hinges on the plot of volume 9 for me and I don't think that's good. And that's because volume 9, unless some moneymaking plot device is used - will show is the husband is just a warrior in his mind or if he can actually decide and do anything other than being a passive cuck.
As a reader, I don't like the angst of having to wait for more to see if the character I identify the most has a good plot or not. In this stories, it makes feel like a cuck and I despise cucks, which ends with a no purchase.
I mentioned Newlywed Newdesires before and I will add Kirsten Mccurran's "The new wife on Milford Court". I only bought the series after the release of volume 4 - the last - and reading it to avoid a repeat of the disapoint of the similar "Tempting Kate" from Michael Andersen. With The Contact running up to 15 volumes, there's a risk of buyers with a dispositon similar to mine to wait for the release of the final volume to decide if the series is worth spending the money or not.

I will end this with a proper review of The Contact Volume 8 okay?
I use a lot of IA on my work and its presence was felt. I don't mind it being used. If it's IA only is very good and I am curious about the models used. The sentence structure of the wife describing the husband seemed rather OpenAI or some version of Claude - I mostly use Claude. But the dashes, oh the long "-" were cringe. Even if you use IA to clean up the text like I do in my work documents, be more careful with the final touches.
I liked the final sequence with the husband becoming aware of the wife not acting as his partner. I don't like his lack of action but it's part of the plot. I don't know where the story goes but be careful with writing yourself into a corner. At the current point, I see the wife finding the original premise for the corruption and siding with the lover because he showed himself to be the superior man. That could be an ending but if not, where to take the story from there? Total corruption, TA-style? That's an option too and your choice.
Also be careful of becoming "type-casted" though. I don't touch Manus Dare stories for ex. On the other hand, be careful about branching out and losing your audience - Alex Lee was an instant buy for me but after he joined the group of Kirst MCcurran and the others he became more hardcore and more "word-count averse".
I am also looking at the other story too. So far it has little to offer so I am on the fence. Waiting for more.

And after this wall of text, I am off. Sorry for the long post. I just wanted to add constructive criticism.

A very good analysis of the genre and of the story. I took a look at Beasts and Beauties, and I really didn't like the whole hybrid and mad scientist plot about getting revenge by creating a new species—especially the part where the couple is thinking about cuckolding while they're being held captive.

I also share your preferences when the love between the couple is best preserved and feels grounded in real life, as well as your dislike of disrespect and the lack of love shown by the FMCs.

As for The Contact, it's true that AI is used, but I think it's done well. My view is that as long as the ideas come from the author, getting help with the writing itself doesn't really matter.

I hope I'll be able to read more of your recommendations and criticism in the future. Thanks.

 

[polpolp]

In your statement, you have highlighted some interesting points and illustrated them with examples from other stories.
It is to be hoped that the author, ‘Sire Reichenbach’, will think about the most of these ideas.

It remains to be seen how this will develop in the coming chapters and which path she will take.
An analysis of the preceding chapters makes it clear that the plot could develop in two different directions.
On the one hand, there is the possibility that the development hinted at in the last two chapters will continue, resembling the story ‘TA’ mentioned earlier.
On the other hand, the plot could also take a new turn, in which the husband’s (James) presence comes to the fore and he resists the attempts at manipulation by the pair (Jenna and Ray). It is, in particular, the intention behind the plot that the pair are pursuing: to make him compliant and turn him into a weak, spineless supporting character.

At one point, he has reduced himself to a figure who can be described as undignified and dishonourable. This happened when he saved Jenna’s arse in front of her boss. In this scenario, he presented himself as the sole initiator and person responsible of Jenna's sexual encounter with Ray.
In doing so, he sacrificed himself for her and humiliated himself, all for her sake!
In the eighth chapter, the humiliation went even further: his (supposedly loving) wife treated him like a snail and ignored him as if he were a used handkerchief.

If Jenna (assuming that James reveals the reason why he led her into Ray’s company at the start) were to seek out Ray’s company with the intention of being close to him and were to go to him, James would have no choice but to separate from her.
It would be interesting to observe what efforts Jenna would make to win back her estranged husband.
This aspect could serve as a motivation for all the protagonists to find a solution to the new situation that has arisen.

-- PC

As always, that's a very good analysis. I especially agree with your point about James sacrificing his dignity and enduring humiliation to save his wife. The worst part is that he got absolutely nothing special in return—not even a heartfelt declaration of love or a tender intimate moment. Meanwhile, Ray gets an incredible fuck simply for acting possessive toward her during dinner.

As for the two possible directions you mentioned, I think the story is heading toward something very similar to TA. The author has incorporated so many elements that mirror TA that it almost feels like a tribute to it. It's probably in his best interest if he wants to sell more copies, but it won't be either interesting or original.

I really like your idea where Jenna grows so close to Ray, while showing James less and less love, affection, and companionship, that James eventually leaves her. Then the roles are reversed, and Jenna is the one who has to win him back. It would be even more interesting if Ray hadn't anticipated that outcome and watched the situation spiral out of his control, causing him to make fatal mistakes that ruin his career. A guy like him has almost certainly done illegal things to reach the top of his career despite being an overweight, foul-smelling, thoroughly repulsive person.

 

[fantafan]

Okay here's an ePub for Executive Priviledge 1-19 for those who want it. Thanks so much zxcv1029!

 

[fantafan]

And here's Slipping into Depravity Ch 1-50 as a text file. I'd convert it but I can't seem to figure out how to preserve line breaks in the conversion etc etc and its getting too painful. If somebody wants to convert to PDF/ePub have at it.