In my fanfic, the relationship dynamics and plot are as follows:
- Sarah comes from a family of conservative financiers. She was very irresponsible about her studies, attending only to get her parents to leave her alone because she was supposedly studying. But she spent most of her time, of course, at clubs and parties, where she made some dubious connections – a sort of P. Diddy equivalent.
- She wasn't in a real relationship with her "roommate," of course. It wasn't exactly friend-zoned, but rather used him as a way to cover for her studies and generally hang around with her for little things. He himself, of course, didn't understand the whole situation and, being in love with her, thought they were in a relationship.
- At some point, Sarah learns that her (her parents') credit cards have been blocked. The thing is, her family found out about her lifestyle and her connections, and a scandal ensued. And now, potentially, the family's business and finances are transferred solely to her brother. We'll keep the theme of the girl's jealousy of her brother, who gets everything in life.
- After Sarah's hysteria, she comes up with a plan in which she will take advantage of Daniel. The beginning of the scam is roughly the same, but with some caveats. Yes, she also says she's been lying all this time, that she wasn't in a relationship and was living with a neighbor, and she downplays the scandal by saying only that her parents aren't happy with her club life and now she needs to come home and impress them. And no, she won't be able to persuade a random friend, because they'll find out about her, since "Di" will have to talk about her life and studies at university, and that Sarah is a diligent student.
- The essence of the plan is to, in collusion with her new connections, use drugs to destroy the guy's personality, turning him into a dependent and controllable zombie, and then plant him as a target for her brother. And then she can frame him, tarnishing his reputation in the eyes of his conservative parents by claiming he's dating a trans person, or use this to blackmail him, and, ultimately, regain access to the family finances. Her club friends help with the right chemistry, counting on a certain percentage of these funds. Why not simply persuade such a trans person to seduce her brother? It's a question of loyalty. Sarah doesn't have suitable friends she could control and trust, and with whom she could be sure that information wouldn't leak.
- Di obediently follows orders, in a kind of "limbo" of confused thoughts, unable to concentrate on the situation. For example: She goes to the club, only two thoughts running through her head: "Dance for Sarah's brother, because that's the plan" and "Make sure to give him a blow job in the bathroom, because no one likes girls who don't give blow jobs in the bathroom." Instead of a dim-witted rich kid, we transform her brother into a decent and collected person (and this explains why he's the family favorite). But the farce goes too far, and the brother takes Dee's attention too seriously, and Sarah loses control of the situation when they decide to have some privacy. It's then that it's revealed that she's in a trance, and Dee, high on drugs, doesn't realize anything is wrong. But the brother also realizes that something is wrong with Dee, and she's not completely drunk. And during the conversation, his sister's plan becomes clear.
- Steve and Dee get along, and he, under the guise of "traveling" and "long dates," helps our heroine come to her senses a little (though we understand that his brain is likely irreversibly damaged and his memory will never be fully restored). They're already preparing their own counterplan to put his sister and her suppliers away, exposing this network of poisoners who are soliciting prostitution. Apparently, in the process, their relationship strengthens, going beyond "chick giving head to a strong guy." Maybe after a few beers and listening to some decent music, Steve succumbs to the experiment.
I'd leave the ending to the reader's discretion: will Steve and Dee's relationship survive? Will Dee want to return to her old life, and what role will she choose to maintain?
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