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[CrazyDad]

Caroline - Parte 06View attachment Page_001.jpg

 

[Jhony Cash]

"English Adaptation and a New Approach to Dr. Brandie's Story 46 (Personal Adaptation) Page 01 to 20

 

[Jhony Cash]

"English Adaptation and a New Approach to Dr. Brandie's Story 46 (Personal Adaptation) Page 21 to 40

 

[Jhony Cash]

"English Adaptation and a New Approach to Dr. Brandie's Story 46 (Personal Adaptation) Page 41 to 60

 

[Jhony Cash]

"English Adaptation and a New Approach to Dr. Brandie's Story 46 (Personal Adaptation) Page 61 to 80

 

[Jhony Cash]

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[CrazyDad]

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[USP45]

Whew, I think Doggie earned some kibble lol!

 

[justanothernoob]

Save me the search, is part 46 the most current chapter om the forum?

 

[CrazyDad]

Caroline - Parte 07

 

[Jhony Cash]

Save me the search, is part 46 the most current chapter om the forum?

The chapter 46 is a reinterpretation of mine of Dr. Brandie, something that I consider fundamental to give consistency to the story. I want something more engaging, with a more consistentnarrative, leading the reader into a dive into the plot. If I simply rendered and put some dialogue balloons without giving a more adequate direction to the moment experienced by the character, I would not propose this newapproach. PigKing does good work, but I still consider him very incipient in relation to the composition of the more detailed scenes compared to many works out there. I consider their work good artistic work, despite therebeing many poorly done works, of course, by other artists. I consider their proposal very good, but I think there is a lot missing for them to reach a higher level. Chapter 46 represents a new approach to Dr. Brandie's journey, an opportunity to deepen the plot and engage readers more intensely. I recognize PigKing's talent, but I feel there isstill room for growth, especially in the composition of more detailed scenes. While reviewing PigKing's work, I noticed a lack of depth in scene descriptions. Although the artistic work is competent, there is often thatextra element missing that truly immerses the reader in the world of the story. I believe their proposal has great potential, but to achieve a higher level, it is necessary to invest more in creating engaging atmospheres andrichness of details. Each scene should be like a vivid painting, where every element contributes significantly to the narrative. In this revised chapter, I aim to fill these gaps by delving deeper into the characters'emotions and environment construction. Every word will be carefully chosen to transport the reader into the story, making them feel as if they are living every moment alongside Dr. Brandie. It's an ambitious challenge,but I am confident that, with dedication and attention to detail, we can elevate the quality of this work to a new level of excellence.

 

[CrazyDad]

 

[SliferSkyDragon]

You did a really good job. Thank you for sharing it.

 

[Jhony Cash]

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[Jhony Cash]

English Adaptation and a New Approach to Dr. Brandie's Story 45 (Personal Adaptation) Page 21 to 40

 

[Jhony Cash]

English Adaptation and a New Approach to Dr. Brandie's Story 45 (Personal Adaptation) Page 41 to 60

 

[Jhony Cash]

English Adaptation and a New Approach to Dr. Brandie's Story 45 (Personal Adaptation) Page 61 to 80

 

[Jhony Cash]

English Adaptation and a New Approach to Dr. Brandie's Story 45 (Personal Adaptation) Page 81 to 101

 

[CrazyDad]

Caroline - Parte 07 View attachment Page_032.jpg

 

[Grifon]

Eu estou pensando em mudar o curso da Dr Brandie. Ela desistir da clínica médica e voltar a trabalhar com veterinária.

It's a shame that you're thinking about this change of plan. In my opinion, the Dr. Brandie series was incredible when it didn't have that ''bestiality'' appeal.
Good luck with your new plans to Dr. Brandie.


(É uma pena que você esteja pensado nesta mudanças de plano. Na minha opinião a série Dr. Brandie era incrível quando não tinha esse apelo ''bestialidade''. Boa sorte com seus novos planos a Dr. Brandie.)