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[Various Artists] Melissa N. - Melissa 822 inspired Comics, Stories & Artwork

Hey! I'm not sure if I can do this here but I was writing a story (https://fictionmania.tv/searchdisplay/authordisplay.html?word=6535) and to be honest I was a little disappointed by the lack of reviews.... it's part of my first story and I know it's not perfect by far but I'd really appreciate any comments and advice you could give me
Hi Sara - I skimmed through all five parts and I would say that from the number of views you are not doing anything wrong. The last part had a few mistakes I spotted but nothing major. perhaps you could break down each of the five parts into smaller chapters? Lack of reviews is par for the course on FM so dont get too downhearted.
 
Hi Sara - I skimmed through all five parts and I would say that from the number of views you are not doing anything wrong. The last part had a few mistakes I spotted but nothing major. perhaps you could break down each of the five parts into smaller chapters? Lack of reviews is par for the course on FM so dont get too downhearted.
Thank you Elaine, means a lot coming from you
 

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  • Another Medical Malpractice - HeteroD.pdf
    Another Medical Malpractice - HeteroD.pdf
    17.3 MB · Views: 583
  • Medallion of Zulo Perfect Bimbo - HeteroD.pdf
    Medallion of Zulo Perfect Bimbo - HeteroD.pdf
    18 MB · Views: 413
  • Perfect Witness Protection 01 t - HeteroD.pdf
    Perfect Witness Protection 01 t - HeteroD.pdf
    5.2 MB · Views: 490
Hi I have 3 files from HeteroD
Perfect Witness Protection 01 thru 064
Medallion of Zulo Perfect Bimbo 01 thru 181
Another Medical Malpractice 01 thru 192
Not saying these are poorly done comics or anything but they don't seem very similar to Melissa n works at all. Maybe they should have a thread of their own?
 
I saw on deviantart that dress code arrogance from Cassierosewatson has a part 3, is anyone willing to share this part? I'm curious what they had in store.
 
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