Looking for Don Silver thread Toxic Attraction chapters

[Pete]

Hope I find Looking for don Silver thread TA chapters

 

[makoto shishio]

That’s the kind of thing that really pisses me off about some stories. Like, the husband gets replaced so quickly—love fades fast, and so does the companionship—so why should he stick around? He gets ignored by his wife, there’s no sex, they don’t share anything anymore; he just pays the bills, and in some stories, he ends up completely alone. The marriage is over, and the love is gone too. Not to mention how, out of nowhere, the husband stops loving his wife and actually wants to see her with other men, getting pregnant and leaving him.

 

[Powerconti]

Sire_rickenbach, stories are truly great if you don't know where it's headed or even if you know where it's headed, there better be some gnarly bends in the road.

The four outlines or endings you laid are not very appealing to be honest. The best stories I've read always read like a heist, a pursuit of the incredibly beautiful women, against all odds to the MC. ....

I shall refrain at this point from analysing the issue of incest that has been raised, as I am opposed to this subject matter. It should be acknowledged, however, that this merely reflects my personal view and should by no means be regarded as a general criticism.

In my view, the two aspects you have highlighted are essential for classifying these texts within the relevant genre.
The process initiated by the hunter to obtain the object of desire can be described as ‘hunting and pursuing’. This process is associated with a high degree of excitement, which can be termed ‘suspense’, as the situation may deviate from the plan at any moment.
It should be noted that both aspects, which make the story topical, appealing, interesting and exciting, are lost when the husband or partner goes along with everything, is relegated to a supporting role, appears spineless and is made a figure of fun.

As soon as this happens, the story loses any ability to capture the audience’s attention and keep them engrossed.
Subsequently, a phenomenon emerges that resembles a broken record playing the same thing over and over again.

For this reason, some readers, myself included, are keen to discuss Sire Reichenbach’s *THE CONTACT*. Her writing style and storytelling ability are outstanding; these qualities make her story unique and hold considerable potential for it to achieve cult status.

-- PC

 

[RustyV]

One aurthor i recommend to anyone is Tinto Selvaggio, nobody write better characters than tinto, i am surprised that his work is discussed rarely on this forum. I am looking for chapter 25-70 of his patreon series “lanie comes of age” which is extension of his best works “breaking us both” and “breaking us twice”. I recommend it to anyone into hard cuckold erotica or anyone into hotwife erotica with world building.

 

[fantafan]

you might want t check out Vivian White/Valley her literotica page can be found here https://www.literotica.com/authors/RoleplayLiterate/works/stories
but if you want to support her patreon its here https://www.patreon.com/cw/VivianWhite Cuckold consequences is one of her best and i bought it after reading it on literotica to support her. The couple are not forced into cuckolding but the story is all about the husbands redemption arc

Take note that her output is W-A-Y down. She lost her job, got a new job, various things going on obviously but isn't putting out much of anything right now. Used to be a fave of mine and oft recommended.

 

[fantafan]

One aurthor i recommend to anyone is Tinto Selvaggio, nobody write better characters than tinto, i am surprised that his work is discussed rarely on this forum. I am looking for chapter 25-70 of his patreon series “lanie comes of age” which is extension of his best works “breaking us both” and “breaking us twice”. I recommend it to anyone into hard cuckold erotica or anyone into hotwife erotica with world building.

There's a whole thread with lots of his stuff from Amazon and a bit from his Patreon at:

Thread '[Tinto Selvaggio] Hotwife/Cuckold/Bull/Domination'

Dec 13, 2023

Tinto Selvaggio writes quite hard hotwife and cuckold stories featuring Richmond, a rich older man dominating couples. "Breaking Us Both" is the first series.

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But yeah, hard cuck including bi-stuff isn't everybody's cup of tea though its very popular. From the feelings expressed by some on this thread it might not be popular here.

 

[GKeen]

Does anyone BtND 19?

 

[fantafan]

Trying to organize and complete some of the series that are posted here. I know A Young Couple's Journey (sequent to The New Tenant) by Antarctica77 Part 24 has been out since June. I believe it has been posted here but perhaps only in a now-vanished gofile. Anybody have it? Looked on Kemono, google search, search here, vipergirls, etc. Thanks in advance.

 

[polpolp]

There's a whole thread with lots of his stuff from Amazon and a bit from his Patreon at:

Thread '[Tinto Selvaggio] Hotwife/Cuckold/Bull/Domination'

Dec 13, 2023

Tinto Selvaggio writes quite hard hotwife and cuckold stories featuring Richmond, a rich older man dominating couples. "Breaking Us Both" is the first series.

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But yeah, hard cuck including bi-stuff isn't everybody's cup of tea though its very popular. From the feelings expressed by some on this thread it might not be popular here.

This story is one of the worst I've ever read. I had to force myself to finish both books. Saying that Tinto is a master at writing characters is a complete joke—the clichés are on a level I've never seen before, and the character development is utterly unrealistic.

You can't even call this hard cuckold anymore; it's inhuman cuckoldry because the level of disrespect, cruelty, and humiliation is pushed to the absolute extreme.

Let's compare it to TA: Vaughn, the MC, makes Dan look like a newborn when it comes to being a wimpy cuckold. If you're looking for every humiliating kink imaginable to inflict on your main character, look no further—Vaughn experiences all of them. By the end of the two books, he's barely even human anymore. What's even worse is that the author constantly shows us Vaughn's rebellious inner thoughts, only to have him contradict himself a second later.

Over the course of nearly 1,800 pages across both stories, he's betrayed, humiliated, and emotionally destroyed over and over again. Some scenes genuinely made me want to throw up (spoiler: he has "SISSY CUCK" written on his body while his wife, wearing their wedding dress, has "CUCK WHORE" written on hers, with the two of them being used side by side...).

Both wives start out as loving, very vanilla women, only to become cruel sluts who have absolutely no love or respect left for the MC. Of course, they both fall in love with the bull. One becomes completely submissive, while the other switches, but by the end neither of them has any real feelings left for the MC. The worst moments are when he tells them "I love you" and they either don't answer or respond with another humiliating remark.

And then there's the bull, Mr. Richmond. You thought Lester was a ridiculous character because of his almost omnipotent abilities, monstrous cock, and status as a sex god? Richmond makes Lester look ordinary. Lester doesn't have even 10% of Richmond's abilities or wealth. Richmond has every conceivable advantage: he's handsome, unbelievably rich, charismatic, much better endowed than the MC, possesses superhuman sexual prowess, and above all is a cruel sadist who enjoys destroying people purely for his own pleasure.

Finally, bisexuality is used solely as another tool to humiliate and break the MC, just like feminization and every other kink in the story. They're presented in the worst possible light, in an extremely negative way. At first glance, it might seem progressive or inclusive, but it's the exact opposite. The way these themes are introduced and used serves only to disgust the reader.

I had knots in my stomach and felt sick several times because of how inhumanly the MC is treated. The worst part is that he's been conditioned so thoroughly that, by the end, he's almost happy. There's still a tiny voice inside him questioning everything, but it's nearly been extinguished.

Yes, Tinto is a competent writer on a technical level, but his characters are so unrealistic and cartoonish that their development has neither logic nor depth. Simply humiliating and destroying the MC more and more isn't character development.

 

[RustyV]

This story is one of the worst I've ever read. I had to force myself to finish both books. Saying that Tinto is a master at writing characters is a complete joke—the clichés are on a level I've never seen before, and the character development is utterly unrealistic.

You can't even call this hard cuckold anymore; it's inhuman cuckoldry because the level of disrespect, cruelty, and humiliation is pushed to the absolute extreme.

Let's compare it to TA: Vaughn, the MC, makes Dan look like a newborn when it comes to being a wimpy cuckold. If you're looking for every humiliating kink imaginable to inflict on your main character, look no further—Vaughn experiences all of them. By the end of the two books, he's barely even human anymore. What's even worse is that the author constantly shows us Vaughn's rebellious inner thoughts, only to have him contradict himself a second later.

Over the course of nearly 1,800 pages across both stories, he's betrayed, humiliated, and emotionally destroyed over and over again. Some scenes genuinely made me want to throw up (spoiler: he has "SISSY CUCK" written on his body while his wife, wearing their wedding dress, has "CUCK WHORE" written on hers, with the two of them being used side by side...).

Both wives start out as loving, very vanilla women, only to become cruel sluts who have absolutely no love or respect left for the MC. Of course, they both fall in love with the bull. One becomes completely submissive, while the other switches, but by the end neither of them has any real feelings left for the MC. The worst moments are when he tells them "I love you" and they either don't answer or respond with another humiliating remark.

And then there's the bull, Mr. Richmond. You thought Lester was a ridiculous character because of his almost omnipotent abilities, monstrous cock, and status as a sex god? Richmond makes Lester look ordinary. Lester doesn't have even 10% of Richmond's abilities or wealth. Richmond has every conceivable advantage: he's handsome, unbelievably rich, charismatic, much better endowed than the MC, possesses superhuman sexual prowess, and above all is a cruel sadist who enjoys destroying people purely for his own pleasure.

Finally, bisexuality is used solely as another tool to humiliate and break the MC, just like feminization and every other kink in the story. They're presented in the worst possible light, in an extremely negative way. At first glance, it might seem progressive or inclusive, but it's the exact opposite. The way these themes are introduced and used serves only to disgust the reader.

I had knots in my stomach and felt sick several times because of how inhumanly the MC is treated. The worst part is that he's been conditioned so thoroughly that, by the end, he's almost happy. There's still a tiny voice inside him questioning everything, but it's nearly been extinguished.

Yes, Tinto is a competent writer on a technical level, but his characters are so unrealistic and cartoonish that their development has neither logic nor depth. Simply humiliating and destroying the MC more and more isn't character development.

What you said kind of make sense, yes. I felt the same when i first read breaking us both and when i was going through breaking us twice i thought this book will surely have at least a bittersweet ending looking at what vaughn has gone though over the two book but alas it wasn’t the case.

Coming to his bi stuff, yes it is a turn off for most of the people, and was for me also .i had to put down the book after reading that scene but later i finished the book and ending sure was aweful. Still i came to know that there is 2nd book in the series and finished it also skipping the bi part. But the thing that made these books great were escalation or better put the non linear escalation. For example most of the book if not all follow a mantra which is first husband wants it, wife do things with bull for her husband , then she experiences bull and get drunk on his dick which is kind of lame if you think of it like this.

My perception about tinto changed when i read the later works such as crave my wife which features phil as antagonish when is almost similar to any bull in current stories going around in this thread. His other works such as hotwife trainer, the coupled hotwife and hotwife switch also features different antagonist through they all are part of richmond’s world and later richmond himself make appearance in most of the books.

Tinto’s books are mostly from the perspective of husband , and very rarely from the perspective of antagonist so we mostly hear only male main characters rambling about their cuckold cravings and misses things like richmond’s perspspective of lily’s seduction .But the thing is i think ,as you said yourself, the character of richmond dont need any development as he is extemely rich, handsome , and hung as a horse .which i think in itself is great character motivation for a characterso like lily to be attracted toward his rather than typical wife getting lovestruck on ugly old poor creep of a bull we see in most of the stories.

The main usp of tinto is his world and the characters. Even though one can question development of some if not all of his characters but i think no one could argue that tinto write most distinct characters in this genre. Each of his character is unique and one could differenciate each character ,which i think all other writer misses on. Take one of the famous one, Antartica77 as an example. His character are easily comparable, husbands are similar, wives are similar, and bulls almost seems plagiarised from one story of his to another if not in their appearance then in their actions. Though no shade to Antartica77 as he also has came a long way with his current series BTND though characters still are not distinguishable.

Lastly , i think as this genre is heavily linked to kinks , his stories may not be everyone’s cup of tea. But the thing with tinto is you will find every kink related to this genre and thus every kind of characters specially bulls which other aurthors are hesitant to experiment. For example there is a richmond, the rich cruel man as a bull but also you will find finn who is a construction worker, their is also kinks available like step father which is done extremely well though it is a side arc. So according to my opinion , tinto is kind of aurthor you should check at least once and decide for yourself if he is worth it or not. I think it is worth the ROI of your time.