Why didn't Melanie's Seduction ever get finished by suewatcher... really good build up for an old-school interracial voyeurism story.
The version of this at John Persons is not by the suewatcher at literotica, or at least there isn't a version at literotica.
there is a longer version of the John Persons story at literotica under the pen name jones286
4 chapters 9.8K words. Haven't read it so I don't know if it's "finished".