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I think this covers all the big stories by klrxo.
How M Made Him State Champ, was having a build-up... in the second part, not so much. It was hasty.
Sons of Moms had the same feature... needed build-up. Do appreciate the ambition, mainly, in Sons of Moms chapter 6 when the MC had his way with 6 women, that alone should be fantastic... yet, the lack of build-up, the lack of a more believable story took its toll.
Can anyone recommend stories with the scope, the ambition of KLRXO and, at the same time, a true interest in build-up, in a story with beliavable characters that takes its time??