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Can you upload everything for business all the chapters here ! I lost my collections! So I don't have it ... If you can , that would be wonderful 😊
Hanna23 - Everything for Business Chapters 1 -8 as pdf's
 

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Hanna23 - Everything for Business Chapters 9 -12 as pdf's Too big for the one post.
 

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My greetings to you, dear forum members.
Maybe it's just me, but the story "Hanna23 - Fated Disguise" ended strangely, I had the feeling that this was only the main plot, or was it just me? And then bam! And that's it, two parts and the plot were quickly completed O_O
Maybe you're tired of the story, or you have no more ideas, then it would be better to postpone writing the story, rather than just ending it suddenly, which is not the best way.
 
My greetings to you, dear forum members.
Maybe it's just me, but the story "Hanna23 - Fated Disguise" ended strangely, I had the feeling that this was only the main plot, or was it just me? And then bam! And that's it, two parts and the plot were quickly completed O_O
Maybe you're tired of the story, or you have no more ideas, then it would be better to postpone writing the story, rather than just ending it suddenly, which is not the best way.
For my point of view, hanna is one of those author who has a proper point where the gender bender strated, like Fated Disguise is had a proper reason! That dude had a bad brokeup becouse he is not Manly enough, and his girl dump him for a handsome hunk , so he want revenge! For that he transform himself into a chick to stoll his/her ex's current bf , this was the main reason! So Hanna could really do many things with this plot, it had many possibilities!.but Hanna couldn't do the justice with this awesome plot! And lost the track!...


Now talking about Doing business as it has also awesome plot, but again Hanna mased it up and can't to the proper deliver with the plot!
(Although, this is totally taken or should I say inspired from shaphairfoxx story )


In conclusion, I must say Hanna has really good plot for starting a story , but she/he can't maintain the story line and always messed it up ,
First he or she need to learn how to write a proper story . And she really strat many story together
 
Looks like Liltkit also posted Switched gears to dresses and heels part 11. If anyone could post that here, that would be great.

Thank you very much.
 
Undercover Sting 9 (Ongoing) by Cassie Rose Watson

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For my point of view, hanna is one of those author who has a proper point where the gender bender strated, like Fated Disguise is had a proper reason! That dude had a bad brokeup becouse he is not Manly enough, and his girl dump him for a handsome hunk , so he want revenge! For that he transform himself into a chick to stoll his/her ex's current bf , this was the main reason! So Hanna could really do many things with this plot, it had many possibilities!.but Hanna couldn't do the justice with this awesome plot! And lost the track!...


Now talking about Doing business as it has also awesome plot, but again Hanna mased it up and can't to the proper deliver with the plot!
(Although, this is totally taken or should I say inspired from shaphairfoxx story )


In conclusion, I must say Hanna has really good plot for starting a story , but she/he can't maintain the story line and always messed it up ,
First he or she need to learn how to write a proper story . And she really strat many story together
I think the confusing thing here is that she writes everything in parallel, and you can't do that because you have either one or the other character in your head. And here it turns out that all the characters begin to intertwine with each other. Characters begin to be introduced that should have an impact on the situation, but apparently then she changed her mind and this is already a plot burden that does not help the development of the plot, but rather prevents you from moving forward (like an extra bottle of 5 liters of water, on a vacation in nature where everyone drinks beer and where you go on foot) 🗿
 
I think the confusing thing here is that she writes everything in parallel, and you can't do that because you have either one or the other character in your head. And here it turns out that all the characters begin to intertwine with each other. Characters begin to be introduced that should have an impact on the situation, but apparently then she changed her mind and this is already a plot burden that does not help the development of the plot, but rather prevents you from moving forward (like an extra bottle of 5 liters of water, on a vacation in nature where everyone drinks beer and where you go on foot) 🗿
Yes ...... I think he /she is confused, and maybe he/she got the idea for it starting and , strat everything together, after that everything got blank and boom 💥 hallo guys I am so sorry for may late update, I know I am late , I was sick , 🤢
 
Yes ...... I think he /she is confused, and maybe he/she got the idea for it starting and , strat everything together, after that everything got blank and boom 💥 hallo guys I am so sorry for may late update, I know I am late , I was sick , 🤢
Get well soon
 
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